The Only One

November 30, 2009
By taylor11 GOLD, Wauwatosa, Wisconsin
taylor11 GOLD, Wauwatosa, Wisconsin
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The world changes
the place you knew
where you walked
lips locked
hips locked
hands locked
feelings outburst
fly everywhere
you try to stop them
dont get to happy
because once youre happy
and you know it
he takes it away
makes you sad
the exact opposite
are you picking on me?
am i the only one on earth?
why me out of all the people
what do you have against me
once he pushes you down
youre down
i am trying to get up
trying to grab on to something good
but theres nothing
nothing good
nothing here
nothing for me



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on Jan. 1 2010 at 5:29 pm
JeannineB BRONZE, Wauwatosa, Wisconsin
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okay taylor, im going to be honest..and im not saying anything bad about the other poems because they rock my socks but this poem is seriously my favorite.

i love youuuu soo mucchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

kbye

taylor11 GOLD said...
on Dec. 29 2009 at 3:17 pm
taylor11 GOLD, Wauwatosa, Wisconsin
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thank you guys much for your support, it means a lot to me, so thank you

on Dec. 27 2009 at 12:19 pm
xxBrokenxxHeartedxxTrillionxx BRONZE, Holdenville, Oklahoma
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Ashleygurl,I agree with you 100% this is a very beautiful poem,keep writing you have alot of pontential

on Dec. 26 2009 at 10:18 pm
ashleygurl BRONZE, Marshall, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
some say the world will end if fire, some say ice,from what i've tasted of desire, i hold with those who favor,but if i had to perish twice,from what i know of hate, ice is also great, and would suffice.






-Robert F.

im thethird comment?

how can that be for such a beautiful poem?

taylor11 GOLD said...
on Dec. 24 2009 at 11:35 pm
taylor11 GOLD, Wauwatosa, Wisconsin
15 articles 0 photos 28 comments
thank you very much

on Dec. 24 2009 at 6:13 pm
xxBrokenxxHeartedxxTrillionxx BRONZE, Holdenville, Oklahoma
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This is really good i really like it


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