The Destuctive force

December 12, 2009
By , Keller, TX
Her face.
Her face had no eyes, no nose, and no chin to hold her face up.
But she did have a mouth and a tongue.

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DisortientedIdentity said...
Dec. 25, 2009 at 11:09 pm
I really like the simplicity in this poem, yet it's so complex at the same time. Well done.
Kay4theRoses said...
Dec. 25, 2009 at 7:19 pm
its simple and that lets everyone who reads this relate with their own issues and exsperiences. i really like it.
FlamableFyre This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 25, 2009 at 5:36 pm
So very wise.
Nikole.347. said...
Dec. 24, 2009 at 2:32 pm
nice, nice, nice. i like how you battle the harshness of words by using so few. i hate poetry that tries to spell out its meaning and you left this one pretty simple and abstract. so good job.
Alissa M. replied...
Dec. 24, 2009 at 4:38 pm
Thank you so much, and I know what you mean. I try to make all my stuff as simple but meaningful at the same as possible.
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