The Destuctive force

December 12, 2009
By Anonymous

Her face.
Her face had no eyes, no nose, and no chin to hold her face up.
But she did have a mouth and a tongue.


The author's comments:
Use your words wisely, because when you don't you de-humanize the people around you, including yourself.

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on Dec. 25 2009 at 11:09 pm
Gabrielle SILVER, Galesburg, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"To be nobody but myself -- in a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you everybody else -- means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight, and never stop fighting." -E.E Cummings

I really like the simplicity in this poem, yet it's so complex at the same time. Well done.

Kay4theRoses said...
on Dec. 25 2009 at 7:19 pm
Kay4theRoses, O&#39brien, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"all's fair in love and war." And "Beware of a fat man whose belly doesn't jiggle when he laughs."-A Chinese philosopher. =)

its simple and that lets everyone who reads this relate with their own issues and exsperiences. i really like it.

on Dec. 25 2009 at 5:36 pm
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
I don't have ambitions or desires.
Being a poet isn't my ambition,
it's my way of being alone.
~ Fernando Pessoa ~

So very wise.

Lisblis77 GOLD said...
on Dec. 24 2009 at 4:38 pm
Lisblis77 GOLD, Keller, Texas
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Thank you so much, and I know what you mean. I try to make all my stuff as simple but meaningful at the same as possible.

Nikole.347. said...
on Dec. 24 2009 at 2:32 pm
Nikole.347., Richmond, Kentucky
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nice, nice, nice. i like how you battle the harshness of words by using so few. i hate poetry that tries to spell out its meaning and you left this one pretty simple and abstract. so good job.


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