All She'd Wanted

November 27, 2009
By Heatherr-feather GOLD, Coquitlam, Other
Heatherr-feather GOLD, Coquitlam, Other
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Favorite Quote:
" When you give it all up, you get it all. You end up losing absolutely nothing, other than some well cherished opinions and ideas. "











- Dennis Genpo Merzel


Drowning in the sorrow of a broken heart, she finds a cliff
ready to part
Down and down, she falls so fast
wanting to escape her painful past
The need to live had come and gone
she had lost her strength and couldn’t move on
As her frail body flies through the air
she remembers her life
and all her care
the love she’d spent
the love she’d shared
The jagged rocks below her now
beckoning and ready to break her fall
closer and closer to death she gets
all she’d wanted was to forget
As she hits the water her body tingles
What is this feeling, she can’t understand?
unknown to her unknown to man
Regret


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on Apr. 26 2010 at 12:15 pm
Starrlyt PLATINUM, Willard, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon, even if you miss, you'll land among the stars -Les Brown

Wow...definitely how I feel sometimes...amazing poem.

on Jan. 5 2010 at 5:17 pm
Heatherr-feather GOLD, Coquitlam, Other
15 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
" When you give it all up, you get it all. You end up losing absolutely nothing, other than some well cherished opinions and ideas. "











- Dennis Genpo Merzel

thankk you! I will check out your poetry too :)

lph13 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 22 2009 at 12:06 pm
lph13 PLATINUM, Enid, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
“Life is one big road with lots of signs. So when you riding through the ruts, don't complicate your mind. Flee from hate, mischief and jealousy. Don't bury your thoughts, put your vision to reality . Wake Up and Live!” Bob Marley

dang this is how i feel sometimes actually this is really really good check out some of mine and comment if you want plz and thx


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