November 27, 2009
Things are happening so fast,
With no time to stop and smell the roses.
Can't you see,
That we will never have time to stop and see the beauty that lies beneath?
People are crying out to us,
And we can't help them because we have places to go and to be.
Why not,
Come with me and take a walk in the park?
I can't you say,
I have an appointment to go to.
Can't you just skip an appointment for once?
You finnaly agree,
And take a walk in the park.
While walking in the park,
We see things you would have never seen if you had gone to the appointment.
Take time off to stop and smell the roses.

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miracle_of_hope said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 5:37 pm
i love this. it honestly one of my new favorites
Dunkelheitstieg replied...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 12:52 pm
aw thank u
Moonbeam13 said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 6:01 am
Thanks for all the comments!
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 7:27 am
I like this. But there's something about that I think you should work on. The flow. As I was reading this, it seemed to sound like you were listing lines. And close to the end, where you repeat park so close together, try to avoid from doing that. But keep writing. This is good.
Moonbeam13 said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 1:31 pm
Ohhhhhhhh! I feel so retared!
Moonbeam13 replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 12:15 pm
LMAO Well, I am the first person able to fall up stairs! :)
i<3steven! replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 3:23 pm
i<3steven! replied...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 3:53 pm
nice...i will be sure to read them and comment on
Moonbeam13 replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 6:08 am
Could you read the comment on pain without love?
i<3steven! replied...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 3:42 pm
for shure. i'll let ya know what i think! lol
MadAsAHatter;] said...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 3:59 pm
It's okay, i like your other poems better though.
i<3steven! replied...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 2:50 pm
what the d**k!!!! it's really good, and yeah it's not AWESOME..but it's stilll really good
Moonbeam13 replied...
Mar. 26, 2010 at 1:08 pm
Thanks, for the comment! What does d""k mean?
i<3steven! replied...
Mar. 26, 2010 at 4:00 pm
it means dick. it's a saying that me and my frends have
i<3steven! replied...
Mar. 26, 2010 at 4:44 pm
It means the male genetalia
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