Love Poem

November 26, 2009
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Anticipation lingers,
As his lips touch her skin;
Her heart rejoices
As she lets her lover in.

Gentle in his actions,
He takes her hand in his own;
A smile plays on her lips
As his admission is made known.

In his arms, she is safe,
In his kiss, she is made warm.
A love like their's,
Rarely found in the norm.

Electric shocks shoot through their bodies,
As they hold eachother tight.
His teeth carress her throat,
As he takes a tender bite.

He leans in to kiss her,
As only he might,
The two of them togther,
Such an awe-inducing sight.





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kiteflying<3 said...
Jan. 24, 2010 at 4:06 pm
wow, that was very... i cant even find a word for it. beautiful amazing so true in every way. thank you for that.
 
JillianHale replied...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 5:24 pm
Thanks for the comment. You made my day. :) I think so too. That's what led me to start it.
 
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 3:36 pm
I love this. very passionate.
 
JillianHale replied...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 5:26 pm
Thank you :) I think this is one of the best poems I've ever written.
 
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