Walking in the Rain

November 26, 2009
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Walking in the rain,
My hair sticking to my face,
Beautiful droplets fall,
Turning the world into a magical place.

I hear my footsteps loudly,
As puddles form beneath my feet.
The rain excites my senses
And I can feel my own heart beat.

The sun shines faintly
On the water far below;
The puddles shimmer,
Casting off a heavenly glow.

I hold my breath
As I take it all in,
Silently willing this moment
to never end.

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ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 3:38 pm
i'm loving the rhyme scheme you got going on in your work. it flows so perfectly. and this piece is beautiful. creates a lot of images in my head. keep writing.
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