Heart beats

November 25, 2009
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your hand shakes when you write his name
when you hear his name its just the same
you walk with your eyes closed
just in case you see him
to save the tears for something that deserves them
your heart beats as hard as if someone took a hammer and hit you with it
you're struck
over this jerk
who feels okay with what he did
you say
"I dont deserve this"
and try to move on
but you cant
trying to put someone in his place
but it wont fill
as the space
is seeping with your love for him
you die
its over
youre done
you keep saying that
but why cant you mean it?

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FaithSnyder16 said...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 8:56 pm
Wow, this is really good! I had these feelings before, and It's a really good poem! I really love it! :D
taylor11 replied...
Mar. 31, 2010 at 8:25 am
thank youu!
JeannineB said...
Jan. 1, 2010 at 5:27 pm
ok really, these poems deserve more comments!! sheesh people
NJBjr This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 1, 2010 at 10:17 pm
I agree these poems are great and need a lot more recognition
taylorl1 replied...
Jan. 1, 2010 at 11:29 pm
thank you so much! again!
means alot
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