confusion with life

December 1, 2009
does life have a speed limit
do i have to stop
will the clouds become a blur if i live to fast
i shouldnt stop though if being idle is a sin
the speed of light has nothing on
my mind is faster than that
i am i every galaxy and every solar system
so is my mind too fast or my life?

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Seabosking05 said...
Dec. 18, 2009 at 8:09 pm
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Carl C. said...
Dec. 17, 2009 at 9:36 pm
It's a really good poem with a great message. The flow's really great, except the rhythm kinda lost me at the 5th and 6th line, but I'm a weirdo and you and I probably have a different sense of flow. I really like it though.
SweetStrawberry101 said...
Dec. 17, 2009 at 8:10 pm
I like it
It is short but says a lot
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