confusion with life

December 1, 2009
By Seabosking05 BRONZE, Upton, Massachusetts
Seabosking05 BRONZE, Upton, Massachusetts
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does life have a speed limit
do i have to stop
will the clouds become a blur if i live to fast
i shouldnt stop though if being idle is a sin
the speed of light has nothing on
my mind is faster than that
i am i every galaxy and every solar system
so is my mind too fast or my life?



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on Dec. 18 2009 at 8:09 pm
Seabosking05 BRONZE, Upton, Massachusetts
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thanks for the comments check out my other work like band of fire and souls of kings

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on Dec. 17 2009 at 9:36 pm
Oracion SILVER, Muskogee, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
Fiction's not much different from Reality, sometimes people just forget to look for the magic in their own lives

It's a really good poem with a great message. The flow's really great, except the rhythm kinda lost me at the 5th and 6th line, but I'm a weirdo and you and I probably have a different sense of flow. I really like it though.

on Dec. 17 2009 at 8:10 pm
SweetStrawberry101 BRONZE, Webster, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Spread sprinkles of love and peace everywhere. For happiness in every corner." -By me

"Don't let your past dictate who you are, but let it be part of who you will become."- My Big Fat Greek Wedding

I like it

It is short but says a lot


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