November 29, 2009
By Sync. GOLD, Diamond Back, California
Sync. GOLD, Diamond Back, California
17 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A person who never made a mistake never tried anything new. " -Albert Einstein

A little girl strolls through a white park
A crooked smile on her face; her eyes dark
Wings break out her back
The space around her black
A bloody used knife lye in her palm
It’s weird how she seems so calm
On her chest sits a purple hole
The little girl cut out her soul
In a smooth velvet voice
She explained her deadly choice
“Into my life bad things began to leak
So, I decided to fix it with a kind of tweak
Open your eyes, cant you see it?
Because I cut it out and freed it,
Eventhough some say I cheated,
I can finally smile and smile
That will last a long while.”

The author's comments:
i just started writing idk.

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on Jan. 28 2010 at 1:22 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Wow vry deep

You can feel th raw emotion in it

Vry well written

LalaS BRONZE said...
on Dec. 21 2009 at 7:53 pm
LalaS BRONZE, Channing, Michigan
3 articles 11 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
life is like a box of chocolates you never know what you're gunna get.

I really like this! It's different and I can easily visualize it. Good job!

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