Quick Thought

November 29, 2009
By LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"


I try, I've tried, I swear I'll try
I swear upon my very life
To this day and far on I'll say
My love for you won't go away
To live within a pact of lies
To die within the hurtful cries
I chose, I've chosen, I swear I'll choose
To play this game and never lose
For it becomes a match, death match may it be
As may end without life, unhappily
Destructing a foundation of love cannot break
Just assuming a destruction could possibly take
No is the answer I proudly will speak
Any objections I'll just turn the cheek.
I know, I've known, I swear I'll know
to never, no never, let you go.


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Louis GOLD said...
on Jun. 19 2010 at 8:42 am
Louis GOLD, Paris, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Too much isn't enough.

Again, excellent piece! The triplets you use were a very good idea, and the rythm and rhymes are all perfect. Bravo!

on Feb. 1 2010 at 5:31 pm
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"

Half of my free verse/sonnets/poems in general have song potential..but I completely fail at putting tone and a voice behind my lyrics. :/

on Feb. 1 2010 at 7:29 am
Lover_that_Hates DIAMOND, Reynolds, Georgia
76 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"She was fascinated with words. To her words were things of beauty, each like a magical powder or potion that could be combinded with other words to create powerful spells." From: Lighting(By: Dean Koontz)

thses verses are amazing! you hyave a astonishing talent for song writing. I know this is in free verse, but wow, the song potential blew me away!


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