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I try, I've tried, I swear I'll try
I swear upon my very life
To this day and far on I'll say
My love for you won't go away
To live within a pact of lies
To die within the hurtful cries
I chose, I've chosen, I swear I'll choose
To play this game and never lose
For it becomes a match, death match may it be
As may end without life, unhappily
Destructing a foundation of love cannot break
Just assuming a destruction could possibly take
No is the answer I proudly will speak
Any objections I'll just turn the cheek.
I know, I've known, I swear I'll know
to never, no never, let you go.





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Louis This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 19, 2010 at 8:42 am
Again, excellent piece! The triplets you use were a very good idea, and the rythm and rhymes are all perfect. Bravo!
 
LeilaniLives said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 5:31 pm
Half of my free verse/sonnets/poems in general have song potential..but I completely fail at putting tone and a voice behind my lyrics. :/
 
Lover*that*Hates This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 7:29 am
thses verses are amazing! you hyave a astonishing talent for song writing. I know this is in free verse, but wow, the song potential blew me away!
 
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