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Everything is falling to pieces
I just don't know what to do
My life took a wrong turn somewhere
And I need it to renew

This is not where I belong
Depression by day, tears by night
Everything has gone wrong
And I don't know how to make it right

I can't talk to anyone
Afraid of what they will say
Everyone asks if I'm alright
So, I lie and say I'm okay

There is pain all the time
Suicidal thoughts racing through my head
I don't know how to deal with this
But I'm not sure I want to be dead.



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waiting... said...
Mar. 24, 2010 at 9:37 pm
absolutely wonderful. this poem really hit home w/ me. keep writing!
 
Dominica said...
Dec. 21, 2009 at 8:17 am
that is so true! I know I feel like that sometimes. great work!
 
Samantha W. replied...
Dec. 21, 2009 at 4:12 pm
thank you!
 
bailey bug said...
Dec. 18, 2009 at 12:56 pm
hey sammi.... thats really deep!!!! i LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
 
AmandaVi said...
Dec. 17, 2009 at 7:49 pm
I think it's great! Who cares what the parents s I know where you coming from!ay!
 
Samantha W. said...
Dec. 17, 2009 at 5:54 pm
Thank you for the feedback! :)
 
xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 17, 2009 at 2:27 pm
I really like ths poem and i think every teen in the entire world can connect with it. And all us teens need to realize that it'll get better and that this is all just a phase
 
Cora B. said...
Dec. 16, 2009 at 6:42 pm
i think this poem is true.
every teen thinks about these things.
even i do.
 
Bethani said...
Dec. 16, 2009 at 3:42 pm
Sweetie, it's a great poem but be careful. Keep writing Talk to someone! Anyone! Thanks!
 
shreikingluv said...
Dec. 16, 2009 at 8:16 am
I completely know where you're coming from. I know how it is to feel what you feel. I've been there and tell you the truth.. i don't think i left. Very well written. I can relate and truely say that I love it! I hope everything gets better.. I'm sure it will.
 
Tifini said...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 3:14 pm
I understand and relate to this poem... and scares me to know that there are others out there feeling the pain and abandonment that i have felt for.... a long time. keep writing. this was a great visual for me. i enjoyed it... in a sad kind of way
 
mutekid016 said...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 8:10 am
I am in the same boat. If you read my work you'll get what I feel in my life. Depression, pain, silence, abandenment, lonely, cold, detached, and already dead. i understand that pain. I live with it every day.
 
SDBalla531 said...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 6:59 am
I think you should talk to your parents, doctor, or teacher.you have great writing skills so continue! What will make you happy is watching the cincinatti bengals.
 
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