Forever Ago

November 29, 2009
By truelove4ever222 SILVER, Crosby, Texas
truelove4ever222 SILVER, Crosby, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Daughters of jerusalem, I charge you by the does and gazelles of the field; Do not arouse or awaken love until it so desires. -Song of Songs 2:7


Forever ago I favored you as my mother;
I was naiive then.
Forever ago I spoke of happier days;
Monotony fills my life.
I wonder if you care about what you did to me.
I can't know everything,
So the courts say.
Forever ago I couldn't wait to see you those four hours
Every other Saturday;
Forever ago I respected you.
Now I have this pain that won't heal.
I know more than you think, Mom
But I can't let it go.
Forever ago I loved you--
And I still do.
Forever ago I thouht you loved me too...
But that was
Forever ago


The author's comments:
My life has been blessed but there are some dark places that like to creep out, exspressing the pain I feel.

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on Dec. 22 2009 at 6:08 pm
Let-it-rain-to-hide-my-tears SILVER, Fort Worth, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Live without regrets

wowiknow how tht feels some times the pain is too great

on Dec. 22 2009 at 12:05 pm
Briana Marie BRONZE, Miami, Florida
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I feel this way too, though I love her still.

on Dec. 18 2009 at 8:49 pm
truelove4ever222 SILVER, Crosby, Texas
8 articles 2 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Daughters of jerusalem, I charge you by the does and gazelles of the field; Do not arouse or awaken love until it so desires. -Song of Songs 2:7

I just wrote what was coming from my heart. And to clarify things- I do still love my mother.

on Dec. 17 2009 at 2:37 pm
mylee-ritesz BRONZE, Allen, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If there's nothing you can do about it, don't worry about it. If there's something you can do about it, don't worry about it." -My Friend

This is really good. I like this one... a lot

on Dec. 16 2009 at 7:04 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
34 articles 0 photos 266 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

I like this poem, and i can really connect with it. I've written a couple poems about my mom that weren't so sweet. I think you did a great job =]

on Dec. 16 2009 at 6:45 am
Vylet.Mxoxoxo, Watford, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Love is patient, Love is kind"

Really good x

on Dec. 15 2009 at 9:20 pm
MadAsAHatter GOLD, Ames, Iowa
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That was intense, I really liked it, I actually kind of hate when people say this but I can kind of relate

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on Dec. 15 2009 at 4:54 pm
Rylie GOLD, Terrebonne, Oregon
10 articles 3 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love comes when manipulation stops; when you think more about the other person than about his or her reactions to you, When you dare to reveal yourself fully, When you dare to be vulnerable"

This is really good.




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