The gloom

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Im surrounded by a gloom.
Everywhere I go, it comes after me.
Its sweeps me up like a broom.
Its hits me with its poison when I cant see.

It frolics with me like a doll.
It hurts me till I can't do anything but stand and weep.
And as soon as I begin to crawl.
Its puts me into a deep dark sleep.





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calephchad said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 8:13 pm
I love the imagery and how you can relate this poem to lots of situations and hardships. This poem is so unique. I love it. Thanks for posting this. This is a definite 5 out of 5. If you'd like, come by and check out some of my work. I would highly appreciate it. Thanks again and great poem!
 
***3Lli3*** said...
Dec. 21, 2009 at 8:57 pm
i like how you rhymed the stanzas
 
Dede(: replied...
Jan. 4, 2010 at 12:02 pm
Thanks so muchh (:
 
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