Unavoidable end of innocence

November 28, 2009
By Caroline35 GOLD, Bain De Bretagne ( Britany), Other
Caroline35 GOLD, Bain De Bretagne ( Britany), Other
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Favorite Quote:
"There's never one of anyone"


She's such a child
Laughing all the time
Unable to remember her work
Cryng at each dead pet
As if it were a human

She's such a child
Afraid of getting lost
Needing a phone to be safer
And also to look older
As if she couldn't enjoy her youth

She's such a child
Remembering the most important
Unable to give a concrete expression to her ideas
And crying at each reprimand
As if people didn't like her

She's such a child
Messing up with friends
At every occasion
But forgiving them
With laughs and hugs

She's such a child
And one day, she'll grow older
And I hope it's not going to come too fast
Although you can't stop a drop of water
From falling.



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Kay4theRoses said...
on Jan. 9 2010 at 1:37 pm
Kay4theRoses, O&#39brien, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"all's fair in love and war." And "Beware of a fat man whose belly doesn't jiggle when he laughs."-A Chinese philosopher. =)

you should keep writing this kind of stuff, id read it.

on Jan. 3 2010 at 12:13 pm
Caroline35 GOLD, Bain De Bretagne ( Britany), Other
15 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There's never one of anyone"

Thank you :). The picture is actually my little sister but I understand why you don't like the end. It relates to the title of the poem :) and it's a lot about the idea I have of growing and realizing that life isn't simple at all.

Kay4theRoses said...
on Dec. 27 2009 at 7:47 am
Kay4theRoses, O&#39brien, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"all's fair in love and war." And "Beware of a fat man whose belly doesn't jiggle when he laughs."-A Chinese philosopher. =)

very excellent job. i liked everything butthe very ending because it seemed so out of context- about the falling water. but you probably had a very specific picture when you wrote this.


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