Unavoidable end of innocence

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She's such a child
Laughing all the time
Unable to remember her work
Cryng at each dead pet
As if it were a human

She's such a child
Afraid of getting lost
Needing a phone to be safer
And also to look older
As if she couldn't enjoy her youth

She's such a child
Remembering the most important
Unable to give a concrete expression to her ideas
And crying at each reprimand
As if people didn't like her

She's such a child
Messing up with friends
At every occasion
But forgiving them
With laughs and hugs

She's such a child
And one day, she'll grow older
And I hope it's not going to come too fast
Although you can't stop a drop of water
From falling.





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Kay4theRoses said...
Dec. 27, 2009 at 7:47 am
very excellent job. i liked everything butthe very ending because it seemed so out of context- about the falling water. but you probably had a very specific picture when you wrote this.
 
Caroline35 replied...
Jan. 3, 2010 at 12:13 pm
Thank you :). The picture is actually my little sister but I understand why you don't like the end. It relates to the title of the poem :) and it's a lot about the idea I have of growing and realizing that life isn't simple at all.
 
Kay4theRoses replied...
Jan. 9, 2010 at 1:37 pm
you should keep writing this kind of stuff, id read it.
 
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