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Vows.

What else can I say?
After all this time
The ups and the downs
the good and the bad
What else can I say?

Are you still you
am I still me
After we've grown
What else can I say?

When you still bring
burgandy roses to tell me
I am more beautiful than I think
What else can I say?

When you still hold me like a bird
who fell from its nest
whenever I cry
What else can I say?

What else is there to say except
I do.



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Imagination! said...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 4:22 am:
this is amazing, youve given me goosebumps i loved the imagery and the repition that you used it's really effective.
 
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vampluv11 said...
Dec. 18, 2009 at 10:42 am:
this was so beautifuL! if i wasn't sitting in the middle of the library right now, i might cry!
 
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