Smile

November 21, 2009
By Cady_ PLATINUM, Godley, Texas
Cady_ PLATINUM, Godley, Texas
25 articles 5 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never judge a book by its cover.", and "When you judge another, you do not define them, you define yourself." "Cherish your life." "Love equals eternity."


Why do people call it smiling, when inside your acutually suffering? Or why is it people say how are you, when no one really cares? Why do they have therapist when all they do is listen for an hour and then say the time is up right in the middle of your sentence? Why do people wake up with no one beside them? Are they desperate? Or is it because they know that they are better than drugs, and sex, and looking forward to the future, when your actually looking forward to death, because people treat you like your the wind. Because they suck you in and they spit you out. Is it considered a roller coaster ride? It is if you feel like getting off the second you get on and throwing up before you even step off. Well somewhere people are looking toward the future and starting a family, new goals, and ride into the present instead of the past. If you ask me, it's not a bad idea afterwords to make a new friend and smile while doing it and stop hiding your face.


The author's comments:
Something i like about this peace is you hear a lot of sayings like you smile, but inside your really dieng, well you try to find the right poetry that fitsyou, and you don't even know what it means till it slaps you on the back of the head. Please comment and rate, and check out the other poems.

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Cady_ PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 21 2010 at 8:38 pm
Cady_ PLATINUM, Godley, Texas
25 articles 5 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never judge a book by its cover.", and "When you judge another, you do not define them, you define yourself." "Cherish your life." "Love equals eternity."

No problem.. :P

Lonleydandy said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 8:24 pm
Thanks!!!!

Cady_ PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 8:21 pm
Cady_ PLATINUM, Godley, Texas
25 articles 5 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never judge a book by its cover.", and "When you judge another, you do not define them, you define yourself." "Cherish your life." "Love equals eternity."

thanx very much..i will have to read it sometime,.

Cady_ PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 8:20 pm
Cady_ PLATINUM, Godley, Texas
25 articles 5 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never judge a book by its cover.", and "When you judge another, you do not define them, you define yourself." "Cherish your life." "Love equals eternity."

thanx..it confused me to a little, but like i cant help it cuz i have like an issue where i tend to put down words that first come to mind..lol.

Lonleydandy said...
on Jan. 15 2010 at 10:05 pm
I liked the concept, but I was almost confused in the middle of it. I wrote something sort of like this called "Sometimes You've just gotta put on a Smile" It has the same concept: about the smiling and dying inside. I liked it :D

on Jan. 10 2010 at 2:36 am
Jtrombetti1010 GOLD, Salt Lake, Utah
13 articles 0 photos 19 comments
I think the point of it is really weird, and honestly I think over played........

BUT....

this is about the work, not your point.

I love the voice of it.

Very cynical, and true.

Well written,

But in my humble opinion, a poor analysis of human nature....

still well presented, kudos.


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