people in glass houses

November 21, 2009
By shofiebot GOLD, Thornhill, Other
shofiebot GOLD, Thornhill, Other
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stay like a mover
move like a cruiser
and take me so far away
dance like a tosser
i think we've lost her
she's gotten carried away
these rhymes
are mine
i can't
deny
how hard
i've tried
to sacrfice
the numbness of my beating heart
when i see daydreams
from the start
when i defy
i petrify
but now
i lie
most of the time
in vain
the stain
beyond the wall
in through the window
i bravely crawl
into your bed
into the shed
when i am here
i'll rest my head.

the dead
the dead
the dead
the dead
will reawaken
in my bed.


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shofiebot GOLD said...
on Jan. 17 2010 at 1:07 pm
shofiebot GOLD, Thornhill, Other
10 articles 0 photos 8 comments
haha thanks for the opinion :)

on Jan. 10 2010 at 2:42 am
Jtrombetti1010 GOLD, Salt Lake, Utah
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this poem has so much life, the ending totally captures it, awesome job, but in my humble opinion, really dumb title...

other than that you did an incredible job.

very very unique and original.


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