November 21, 2009
By kevin watkins GOLD, Lake Oswego, Oregon
kevin watkins GOLD, Lake Oswego, Oregon
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Do you feel me love?
Like the sun in the sky
Do you see me love?
Like the ray of the sun awakens your soul
Do you smell my cooking love?
Like our passion boiling over
Does it taste good love?
Like candy hearts cracking by your teeth
Does my voice whisper in your wind?
Like it did when the storm blew over
Do you think of me?
Like you did when your head was out of the clouds.
Do you know I love you love?
Like the millions stars burning in the sky
Does my love grow on you?
Like a plants weeds grasping the flower around the roots.
Does he know your secrets?
Like the wildfire the spread in our hearts
No you don’t, do you love?
All our love is lost

The author's comments:
It uses all five senses and more

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