Autumn's Remembrance

November 19, 2009
By calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
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Things lift,
as cards are thrown into play,
Or drift,
like bad luck with nothing to say.

Things change,
like the color of leaves in the autumn tree;
Or strange,
as this light brightens within me.

As the world keeps turning,
mine paces for reason;
Of why this is happening,
in this beautiful season.


The author's comments:
This poem is about a girl who has turned my world upside down. She influenced me to write this and has given me an autumn to remember. All the credit goes to you.

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on May. 30 2011 at 9:13 am
enkrbffs SILVER, Waco, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
I wish I could remember the specific wording but here goes:

Art is not art if you know how it ends before you begin.

Aw man! I meant five stars but i put four stars!!!

on Nov. 13 2010 at 8:45 pm
ImaneAitDaoud SILVER, Minniapolis, Minnesota
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“look up towards the skies and you'll realize that love is mightier than hate and death is none other than the start of a new adventure.”

i really like this, very discriptive. nice ryming sceme. very poetic

 


on Jul. 2 2010 at 11:17 pm
NotForSqaures SILVER, Flower Mound, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than liked for who you're not" -Not Sure

It's beautiful.

on Jun. 8 2010 at 12:45 am
LoveMyLife BRONZE, Loomis, California
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Favorite Quote:
He's Dead Jim - DeForest Kelley as Doctor McCoy

Wow!!!! I'm so sad it ended. I must have read it eighteen times already, and each time was only more facinating and enjoyable than the last. Not many people can write the way you can. I'm truly grateful that you shared with us.

I want more!! You are such a fabulous writer, my skills pale in comparison to you. Keep up the good work!!!! =)


on Apr. 27 2010 at 12:18 pm
Starrlyt PLATINUM, Willard, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon, even if you miss, you'll land among the stars -Les Brown

Pretty, discriptive, and with a subtle hidden meaning, am I right? lol. I sincerely liked it... :) and fall is my fav season as well...

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on Apr. 11 2010 at 9:52 pm
HaHmAh12 GOLD, Toledo, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"At the age of six I wanted to be a cook. At seven I wanted to be Napoleon. And my ambition has been growing steadily ever since." ~Salvador Dali

fall is my favorite, favorite season :) good work. sorry it took so long for me to check out your stuff. 

on Feb. 26 2010 at 2:26 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
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Thank you so much! This means alot to me!

on Feb. 25 2010 at 10:51 pm
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

AWWW!!! This is amazingly pretty!!! btw... im gunna have prolly six or seven poems for you to check out when they get published.... you are a wonderful poet!!!

on Feb. 8 2010 at 2:43 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
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Thank you for all the encouragement. This really means alot to me.

on Feb. 8 2010 at 2:42 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
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Thanks. I believe so too. It makes the words and their meaning really come alive if the writer has personal experience from it.

on Feb. 4 2010 at 5:49 pm
CuteCourt101 SILVER, Newark, Delaware
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Favorite Quote:
"Acting like someone else is a waste of who you are!" ~Unknown

Your are such a great poet .. do not stop writing .. you have talent!!

on Feb. 4 2010 at 1:56 pm
MissFaber SILVER, Wayne, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing Less.

i love writing based on a personal experience. I think it makes it so much more powerful....

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on Jan. 23 2010 at 4:40 pm
emilyj93 GOLD, Naperville, Illinois
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This is a beautiful piece of writing, you did a great job of saying so much in very few words. It could be turned into a really great song! I would be interested to see what you think of some of my poetry if you ever have a chance

on Jan. 16 2010 at 9:28 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
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Thank you so much. !

on Jan. 12 2010 at 3:10 pm
Emanuella Reznik PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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I like it a lot! :) You used imagery simply, but well. Keep writing!!

on Dec. 14 2009 at 9:31 pm
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"

Quite spectacular actually, this piece captured me right away. Your rhyme scheme and word choice fit perfectly. I loved the idea of cards and almost gambling included, as well as the autumn. Fall is my favorite season. Keep it up!


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