War Song

November 17, 2009
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There is a time when at war,
Men do things they never thought before.

Bullets fly and people die,
Men that will breathe no more.

Men who were so brave,
Are now lying in their grave.

Bullets fly and people die,
Men that will live no more.

History is doomed to repeat,
As the armies lay in defeat.

Bullets fly and people die,
Men that will be no more.

We are doomed to be in war,
In this world forever more.

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TheDarkOne22 said...
Sept. 18, 2016 at 9:16 pm
I love this and it is a very deep thought thank you for publishing this peice.
bluebird408 said...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 4:08 pm
A great poem that really makes you stop and think! Sadly...so true!
Nick20 said...
Jan. 24, 2010 at 7:59 pm
Great job neighbor!!! very proud of you and keep doing what you love!
patsy13 said...
Jan. 24, 2010 at 11:00 am
thought your poem was sad but true, very good words and rhythm keep up the great work
beej said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 6:52 pm
Cesare, you are very talented. Keep up the great work. Looking forward to reading more!
Karen R said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 8:06 am
What a great poem. Keep up the good work!
friend said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 8:04 am
Great job and right from the heart!!!!!! Keep up the good work!!
rocky1 said...
Jan. 18, 2010 at 11:45 am
awesome!!! you captured the feelings for soldiers,families,friends for everyone that war touches from around the world!!!!
ccrescenzo said...
Jan. 13, 2010 at 5:13 pm
oh my gosh this was so good. it makes the reader think about what is really going on and what people are going through. Great job!
kduprey said...
Jan. 10, 2010 at 5:04 pm
As others before have commented, the words of your poem reflect a deep insight beyond your years. Keep creating and we'll keep reading.
North 49 said...
Jan. 4, 2010 at 8:43 pm
Quite insightful and so true of our society today.
MatthewZ said...
Jan. 4, 2010 at 8:39 pm
wow. damn ! i wish i could write like that! try as i may, i will never be as good as you! i do love writing though!
Mary Moylan said...
Jan. 4, 2010 at 1:59 pm
Great job, Cesare! Very insightful, creative and impacting. Keep up the wonderful work! I love poetry! :-)
Scare001 said...
Dec. 31, 2009 at 2:17 pm
Feel free to foward this poem to any of your friends and family. Each person who posts a comment raises me in the Most Discussed category.
Scare001 said...
Dec. 31, 2009 at 2:15 pm
Proud to announce I am now number 49th in the most discussed Free Verse poems category. A grand total of 12160 contestants are currently in this category.
mbunte said...
Dec. 30, 2009 at 9:08 pm
Wow, this is amazing! Great poem!
goose said...
Dec. 30, 2009 at 10:57 am
I am so proud of you! You talent must have come from your Mom! HEEHEE
The Greek said...
Dec. 29, 2009 at 8:05 am
Great job, a wonderful poem, very proud of you, keep up the good job. A big congratulations.
bowler said...
Dec. 28, 2009 at 7:53 pm
very impressive! i also like to write poetry. i think i got it from my grandma....good luck with your poems!
Chudman45 said...
Dec. 27, 2009 at 11:06 am
Very nice job! The first 2 lines reminded me of my uncle who got caught behind enemy lines during WW2 and never wanted to talk about it.
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