Young Girl MAG

November 16, 2009
By Anonymous

Young girl,
Suffocating in your silent sobs,
Drowning in the dry drops of your eyes,
Wading in the waters at world's end.
Like you,
I long
To be anywhere but here.
And I assure you
What they've assured me
So many times before:
There will come a day
When you will burn bold and bright,
Star among morning stars.
They do not know much.
Here is what I know:
Lie to yourself.
Lie to the world.
Star among morning stars.

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on May. 29 2010 at 1:15 pm
This is truly beautiful and trust me when I say I feel the same as the young girl x

on May. 29 2010 at 10:10 am
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

wow gd job :)



on May. 29 2010 at 10:08 am
silver_moonlit10 PLATINUM, Ashburn, Virginia
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Very nicely done.  It moves well and has a great message.


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