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Surrender

November 16, 2009
By LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.


I freeze
In the place
Of his
Cold
Blue
Eyes.
Shooting pain
Through my
Heart.
Agony twisting
In my
Nerves.
As he watches me,
My heart slowly
Breaks.


The author's comments:
just a short poem of what's going through my head right now... on... november 16th at 7:29 PM....

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on Aug. 31 2010 at 8:29 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

(: thank you.

on Jul. 21 2010 at 9:02 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

I think that tis can be interpreted in differnt ways. I love the way it makes the reader think.


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