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I Love You Babe

My head spins
and my thoughts scatter.
My eyes sparkle
and my heart beat strengthens.
My pulse quickens
and my lips twitch into a smile.
Goosebumps rise
and electricity bolts through my body.
A giggle escapes my lips
and my stomach fills with butterflies.
And all you did is say the simple words,
“I love you babe.”





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SilverDawn said...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 2:15 am
Aww, that's so sweet (: You wrote about such typical things that people experience when in love in a simple, easy-flowing way. Pretty good (: Keep writing!
 
Love_Baby replied...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 2:30 pm
Thank you, so much. I really appreciate the comments.
 
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