I'm Done With You

November 16, 2009
You played me along,
used me and let me go.

I really loved you,
I though it was true.

But you,
had a different plan.

Used me up,
got your fill.

Set up your,
back up plan,
and dropped me.
hoping I didn’t find out.

But I’m not slow,
actually I’m a lot smarter than you and your deceiving ways.

Now you have nobody,
because to have anything, you need me.

We tried to be friends,
and you ruined that too.

Now you are alone,
like you should be.

When you left me alone and hurt,
my friends turned their back to you with out a second glance.

Now go ahead and get mad at me,
tell all my secrets!

All it will do,
is make you,
look even worse.

Join the Discussion

This article has 5 comments. Post your own now!

jonas_chick899 said...
May 14, 2010 at 9:36 pm
heyy that was really good:] i felt the voice in it!
SilverDawn said...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 2:20 am
Wow, this is a very strong theme and I'm proud of you for being as strong as you are. I like this poem (: There's nothing wrong with freeverse, but maybe you'd like to try some rhyming? I find knowing how to rhyme well really helps with freeverse too because rhymes are really linked to rhythm and flow, which are important. You're fine with both, but you could get better (: it's just a suggestion~ Great poem!
Love_Baby replied...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 2:29 pm
Thank you. I have wrote poems with rhyme schemes but they seem really young.I'll submit some soon though.
SilverDawn replied...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 3:43 pm
Ohh, cool (: let me know when it's up! and if you're bored, please check out my poems too~
Love_Baby replied...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 8:56 pm
of course i will!
Site Feedback