What I Want to Be

November 16, 2009
By vampluv11 GOLD, Saugerties, New York
vampluv11 GOLD, Saugerties, New York
10 articles 1 photo 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go ask Alice.


Nightmares plague me while
I fall through
Light air plagues me, can I
find someone new?

Togethor, we’ll parade to the grade,
As I scream to myself,
“You fool, look in front of you, see what you must do.”
Walking the streets at night,
the city lights block out the pretty sights

Everything is wrong-
I don’t know who I am
when you’re here/ when you’re gone

Can’t you see
what I’m not,
You’re blind to what
I want to be



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on May. 10 2010 at 11:09 am
.Escape.From.This.Afterlife. GOLD, Short Hills, New Jersey
10 articles 0 photos 94 comments

Favorite Quote:
"bad blood is more satisfying to spill across the floor..."

I really liked this.  It's deep and meaningful and touching.  Nice job, 5 stars!

on May. 10 2010 at 9:24 am
JoetheBlanc GOLD, Roswell, Georgia
14 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the shadow proves the sunshine!"

very interesting. i haven't seen this type of rhyme/ syllabic scheme before. the poem flows well enoguh, though!

vampluv11 GOLD said...
on Jan. 5 2010 at 10:29 am
vampluv11 GOLD, Saugerties, New York
10 articles 1 photo 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go ask Alice.

thank you, both of you ^.^

on Dec. 15 2009 at 4:30 pm
CheshireKitten BRONZE, Riverview, Florida
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5 stars:) Great poem!!

LaylaViolet said...
on Dec. 15 2009 at 11:54 am
Whoa. Totally deep. I love it. I gave it a 5


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