My Love for You

November 16, 2009
My love is as deep as an ocean,
With no stream of fair thee well.
And with my dreams in motion,
My love has great stories to tell.

Love rocks me like a symphony,
Into the sweetest of slumber.
My love can't be expressed simply,
In even the greatest of number.

I could love you through the night and day,
And even after death.
Some men may sweep many women away,
But only you could stop my breath.

Many who reek with envy,
May try to cut my love thin.
I don't blame them if they are jealous of me,
Because love's nectar I bask in.

Daunting on a distasteful discrepancy,
Oh how I wish I knew.
For the sake of me I wish it were easy,
To find out if you like me as much as I like you.

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XxsweetiexX said...
Dec. 12, 2009 at 11:49 pm
dude submit more.... for them to publish deserve the glory of praise for your poems cause they are no doubt amazing.....u kno who this is so.... do what i say ur bff -AV
keithc replied...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 8:55 am
This is awesome, thanks for sharing.
debpol1932 said...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 2:35 pm
Love is all you need !!! Great stuff - keep the words flowing !!
AMikic said...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 7:39 am
This is such an emotional and well written poem from such a young person. I loved it!
BarbaraS1211 said...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 6:50 am
Wonderful poem. Loved the flow and the message it sends.
AHwords said...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 6:25 am
WOW! It made me think to when I was a teen in love. Beautiful !!!! Wanna see more! Go Monika!
XxsweetiexX said...
Dec. 10, 2009 at 10:46 pm
great poem...congrats
teach said...
Dec. 10, 2009 at 5:46 pm
so descriptive & powerful... loved it!
sunflowerpoet said...
Dec. 10, 2009 at 5:43 pm
Absolutely beautiful:) Just beautiful!!
sooooproud said...
Dec. 10, 2009 at 5:24 pm
This is great! I love the ending....what a surprise.
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