It Is She

November 16, 2009
By ccxisleet GOLD, Big Lake, Minnesota
ccxisleet GOLD, Big Lake, Minnesota
15 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To be one's self, is to be truly honest, truly loyal, and truly great."


Your divine beauty is one of mine;
You came to me with nothing but that exquisite smile.
Yet I can’t understand merely why you bring me so much,
Why those jade eyes in-prison me in delight.
How adequate. How enchanting. This all seems…
You’re a goddess of my dreams,
An angel so adorable and how you took me by surprise,
It left me awestruck in remark to the fact I want to call you mine.
Because trust me baby… I’ve already surrendered.


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ccxisleet GOLD said...
on Oct. 3 2012 at 10:10 am
ccxisleet GOLD, Big Lake, Minnesota
15 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To be one's self, is to be truly honest, truly loyal, and truly great."

Thanks, I'm sorry it has taken me so long to get back to you =] I appreciate the feedback, I most recently posted a new poem, If you wouldn't mind checking it out and rating it that'd be great =]. Again, Thank you.

on Jun. 8 2012 at 7:47 pm
I love this. You are one in a million and you can make anyone smile. Keep writing! 

ccxisleet GOLD said...
on Mar. 8 2012 at 11:02 pm
ccxisleet GOLD, Big Lake, Minnesota
15 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To be one's self, is to be truly honest, truly loyal, and truly great."

If I wrote this to about a girl, she wasn't worth remembering, and if I said those things about a girl I would remember, I wrote this piece two years ago almost, and someone has come along in my life, someone who this would apply to. So it more so maybe was a way of inspiring me or wishing for those things in a person. Which it hasn't happened.

KelliB GOLD said...
on Mar. 8 2012 at 12:08 pm
KelliB GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
15 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
Decide that you want it more than you are afraid of it.
- Bill Cosby

This is so cute!! I really like it. Any girl should just date someone that writes something like this about them. Is this about a real girl or just a random inspiration?

---Oh and i want to know the full story of your bio...not that i am a creeper but you did say that if we wanted to know more we could ask. It made me curious.:)---\

Keep it up!!!! Please return the favor and read/comment on any of mine


k.james SILVER said...
on May. 12 2010 at 7:16 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
5 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

Incredible!!! What was your inspiration for this one?

on May. 11 2010 at 5:25 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
20 articles 0 photos 268 comments

Favorite Quote:
You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we're doing it- Neil Gaiman.
Who are you to be who you are?-Le'Na Pernell

awh! this was adorable!....

and very well written! 5/5 stars!!!





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