It Is She

November 16, 2009
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Your divine beauty is one of mine;
You came to me with nothing but that exquisite smile.
Yet I can’t understand merely why you bring me so much,
Why those jade eyes in-prison me in delight.
How adequate. How enchanting. This all seems…
You’re a goddess of my dreams,
An angel so adorable and how you took me by surprise,
It left me awestruck in remark to the fact I want to call you mine.
Because trust me baby… I’ve already surrendered.

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alltheprettyhorses said...
Jun. 8, 2012 at 7:47 pm
I love this. You are one in a million and you can make anyone smile. Keep writing! 
ccxisleet replied...
Oct. 3, 2012 at 10:10 am
Thanks, I'm sorry it has taken me so long to get back to you =] I appreciate the feedback, I most recently posted a new poem, If you wouldn't mind checking it out and rating it that'd be great =]. Again, Thank you.
KelliB said...
Mar. 8, 2012 at 12:08 pm

This is so cute!! I really like it. Any girl should just date someone that writes something like this about them. Is this about a real girl or just a random inspiration?

---Oh and i want to know the full story of your bio...not that i am a creeper but you did say that if we wanted to know more we could ask. It made me curious.:)---\

Keep it up!!!! Please return the favor and read/comment on any of mine

ccxisleet replied...
Mar. 8, 2012 at 11:02 pm
If I wrote this to about a girl, she wasn't worth remembering, and if I said those things about a girl I would remember, I wrote this piece two years ago almost, and someone has come along in my life, someone who this would apply to. So it more so maybe was a way of inspiring me or wishing for those things in a person. Which it hasn't happened.
Kairah027 said...
May 12, 2010 at 7:16 pm
Incredible!!! What was your inspiration for this one?
Jynxx said...
May 11, 2010 at 5:25 pm

awh! this was adorable!....

and very well written! 5/5 stars!!!

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