Do we make life or does life make us?

November 15, 2009
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Do we make life or does life make us? We cannot control life, but yet life can control us. To life, we are nothing but a lost toddler at an amusement park. At first glance we look around and see far too much to comprehend. All we feel are emotions, we cry, we laugh, and we love. But yet, deep within us is the feeling of being overwhelmed. That feeling also has another name, it's called learning, and it is overwhelming...

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wasabigirl said...
Jan. 17, 2010 at 4:37 pm
A beautiful poem that touches something inside each of us. No matter how old we are, there are times when uncertainty and the unknown overtake us. Thank you for this verse.
ameerrante said...
Dec. 28, 2009 at 11:57 pm
Truly amazing; made me ask myself many questions. Very thought-provoking. You are quite intelligent ! I'm glad to find that I'm not the only one who feels this way at some points in my life.
TearsinMind replied...
Jan. 11, 2010 at 4:58 pm
thnx my friend! it took me awhile to be inspired to write something as this. As of now, this and Dreams are my best pieces right now.
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