My Land

November 15, 2009
Every night,
I open my doors
To see a
Of awesomeness.
I can do anything,
I will not falter.
I cannot die.
Is where I rule.
Where I breathe.
Where I live.
And ever.
And ever is always.
And ever I live
In my world.
Where I rule.

Through the dark
Till the light,
I make the wrong

So right.

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Sarbear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 8:25 am
this is so unique, and i love your choice of words. you definately got the message across. keep writing !Check out some of my work too :)
jwhit2003 said...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 4:42 am
Very intense choice of words but to the point. It's nice to see poetry with a deep thought process. Keep on writing, you have a great talent.
Sunshine said...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 7:47 am
Superflyy....I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem. It is very deep and yet it had a clear message. Keep writing!! This world needs your talent!! I give it 2 snaps up and a twist!!
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