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the boy across the room
who sits and stares.
with smilimg eyes and a playful air
across from him sits a lady so fair
with golden silk for hairshe smiles at him and he smiles back
i feel miles and miles away from that boy
but just as surly that he smiles,i find i can simle too.
and one day i find myself grinning back at my own special boy with a look in his eye





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ashbash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 13, 2009 at 6:48 pm
this poem is amazing!!
 
Polkadotsxx25 said...
Dec. 13, 2009 at 6:12 pm
You write amazing poetry! I have some work of my own, lmaoo I write mine during school. Mine are usually about me and my best guy friend and us thinking how sad it would be for us to be apart. He help me write my first poem. Anyway, Your an amazing writer. I hope to see more work and I hope yours is published!
- A friend (:
 
kheart said...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 8:33 pm
I love this poem! You are really good you should write more
 
Rachie_P. replied...
Dec. 12, 2009 at 8:11 am
i have i'm just waiting for it to be approved
 
jacks_sally said...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 12:44 am
I like it, its,,,, hopeful(:
 
Rachie_P. replied...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 6:04 am
thats excacly how i wanted it to be
 
jacks_sally replied...
Dec. 13, 2009 at 12:48 am
it's really good and you clearly got your point across but not in a straight out way
 
moooogan said...
Dec. 10, 2009 at 3:17 pm
awsome poem!!!!
bet ur proud about it being ur first post!
 
i<3zak!!!!!! said...
Dec. 9, 2009 at 2:12 pm
hey i really like how ure poem flows i wrote one called crush you should read it.
 
Meyuki replied...
Dec. 9, 2009 at 4:13 pm
thanx i will :)
 
Rachie_P. replied...
Dec. 10, 2009 at 6:04 am
thanx. haha :-)
 
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