across the room

November 23, 2009
By Rachie_P. GOLD, Virginia Beach, Virginia
Rachie_P. GOLD, Virginia Beach, Virginia
11 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
don't spend your life hiding from the monsters under your bed> go out and enjoy life to the fullest


the boy across the room
who sits and stares.
with smilimg eyes and a playful air
across from him sits a lady so fair
with golden silk for hairshe smiles at him and he smiles back
i feel miles and miles away from that boy
but just as surly that he smiles,i find i can simle too.
and one day i find myself grinning back at my own special boy with a look in his eye


The author's comments:
this is about love heartbreak and redemtion through the beauty of another

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on Dec. 13 2009 at 6:48 pm
iAmTheStardust PLATINUM, Moon Twp., Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"The prettiest flowers grow in the biggest pile of manure."

this poem is amazing!!

on Dec. 13 2009 at 6:12 pm
Polkadotsxx25 BRONZE, South Plainfiled, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"ill muster every confidence I have, for you I will" - Teddy Geiger (For you i will)

You write amazing poetry! I have some work of my own, lmaoo I write mine during school. Mine are usually about me and my best guy friend and us thinking how sad it would be for us to be apart. He help me write my first poem. Anyway, Your an amazing writer. I hope to see more work and I hope yours is published!

- A friend (:

on Dec. 13 2009 at 12:48 am
jacks_sally BRONZE, Lincoln, Missouri
2 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're all waiting for something." dunno who its by but i like it

it's really good and you clearly got your point across but not in a straight out way

Rachie_P. GOLD said...
on Dec. 12 2009 at 8:11 am
Rachie_P. GOLD, Virginia Beach, Virginia
11 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
don't spend your life hiding from the monsters under your bed> go out and enjoy life to the fullest

i have i'm just waiting for it to be approved

kheart SILVER said...
on Dec. 11 2009 at 8:33 pm
kheart SILVER, Union Grove, Wisconsin
9 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every second is countless. Every minute is different. When you came around." -kheart

I love this poem! You are really good you should write more

Rachie_P. GOLD said...
on Dec. 11 2009 at 6:04 am
Rachie_P. GOLD, Virginia Beach, Virginia
11 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
don't spend your life hiding from the monsters under your bed> go out and enjoy life to the fullest

thats excacly how i wanted it to be

on Dec. 11 2009 at 12:44 am
jacks_sally BRONZE, Lincoln, Missouri
2 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're all waiting for something." dunno who its by but i like it

I like it, its,,,, hopeful(:

moooogan said...
on Dec. 10 2009 at 3:17 pm
awsome poem!!!!

bet ur proud about it being ur first post!

Rachie_P. GOLD said...
on Dec. 10 2009 at 6:04 am
Rachie_P. GOLD, Virginia Beach, Virginia
11 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
don't spend your life hiding from the monsters under your bed> go out and enjoy life to the fullest

thanx. haha :-)

on Dec. 10 2009 at 5:55 am
---Sixx--- PLATINUM, /, Other
26 articles 4 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"To see what a man is like, take a look at how he treats his inferiors, not his equals.\"

awesome poem- i also noticed your name, rachie_p; thats my nickname and my last initial!

Rachie_P. GOLD said...
on Dec. 9 2009 at 4:13 pm
Rachie_P. GOLD, Virginia Beach, Virginia
11 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
don't spend your life hiding from the monsters under your bed> go out and enjoy life to the fullest

thanx i will :)

meggers SILVER said...
on Dec. 9 2009 at 2:12 pm
meggers SILVER, San Angelo, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
if u cant say something nice then dont say anything at all

hey i really like how ure poem flows i wrote one called crush you should read it.


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