Comfortable

November 30, 2009
By Chocolatecherries GOLD, Clarksville, Arkansas
Chocolatecherries GOLD, Clarksville, Arkansas
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You make me feel comfortable.
Smiling the way you do,
making me have no worries.

I start to care less about what people say.
Not listening unless it's about my friends,
or totally bashing on me.
Not caring if it's anything less than that.

Still, this does not take my jealousy away.
It makes it stronger, and I am sorry for that.

I don't understand why you see me in a different way.
Like I actually matter, but it's probably just a phase.
Like I could actually matter to someone? Ha.

So, I"m sitting here looking out the window,
thinking of times that you probably will never remember.
Like the sweet things you've said to me
And also the cutest smile on your face, I shall not forget that.

I'm not forgetting now, but you will, if you haven't already.
You make me feel at peace, smiling the way you do.
Making me smile too.


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on Dec. 13 2009 at 9:51 pm
Hollywog. PLATINUM, Mole Creek, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It's better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all..

An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind - Ghandi

That poem's amazing, honey!!

Congratulations - you managed to create a little window for people to view your lives and opinions through.

Well done and keep writing - you have real talent.

5/5!!

Love and Sunshine,

Holly

xoxo

on Dec. 12 2009 at 10:51 pm
Chocolatecherries GOLD, Clarksville, Arkansas
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:) you're very welcome. I"m glad you enjoyed it

on Dec. 12 2009 at 9:58 pm
StandardToaster PLATINUM, Pasadena, California
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Favorite Quote:
I don't suffer from insanity; I enjoy ever minute of it."

this is so deliciously unique! I like how it isn't one big depressing poem about love but that it is kinda hopeful and happy in a way. thanks btw, u just made my day with this poem =)

on Dec. 10 2009 at 11:13 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

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