your girl

November 26, 2009
By Jezabel PLATINUM, Ricmond, Virginia
Jezabel PLATINUM, Ricmond, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
In the end we will not the remeber the words of your enemys, but the silence of are friends.
~ Martin Luther King Jr.


I what to be your girl,
To be the one you wanted
To be the one you held
Cared about, smiled at
Told me I was yours
I wanted to be
Friends told me he was mean to me
I ignored them
Believing that you cared
Teachers asked if I was okay
There eyes showed concern
As mine shown tears
Wishing you would comfort me
But your looking for some key in your game
But then strangers and my enemy’s
Came up to be and said not that they didn’t like you
Like before
Now the say he isn’t good info for me
I told you though tear
That I didn’t like how this was
We sat there in silence
I pleaded for you to share
You said your thought were your own
I asked if you liked me
You replied you weren’t sure
I think I felt my self die
Then why I whispered hoarsely did you ask me out
You look at me
With out pain and said you don’t remember
I what to be your girl
I like you
But so did you
You love you
And I’m not a home wrecker


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on Dec. 13 2009 at 9:58 pm
Hollywog. PLATINUM, Mole Creek, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It's better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all..

An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind - Ghandi

This poem's beautiful.

I can relate and you have a real talent for expressing yuorself through writing. Keep it up - you're really good!!

Love and Sunshine,

Holly

xoxo

on Dec. 13 2009 at 6:25 pm
Jezabel PLATINUM, Ricmond, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
In the end we will not the remeber the words of your enemys, but the silence of are friends.
~ Martin Luther King Jr.

thank u so much

on Dec. 10 2009 at 11:17 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

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