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Swimming Pool

November 15, 2009
By Physcowrestler119 BRONZE, Riverside, California
Physcowrestler119 BRONZE, Riverside, California
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Favorite Quote:
"just because my wounds aren't visible doesn't mean I don't have pain."


Everyone was running to the pool they say someone is in the water

They say the person may be dead by now

When I get there they are all just standing there

So I start screaming at them to help the person in the pool

But they can’t hear me or even see me at that matter

I took a look in the water and I couldn’t believe what I saw

It was then when I realized I was dead and no one helped me

But it didn’t seem to hurt until I realized that no one cared about me


The author's comments:
I wrote this piece because I feel like no one cares about me. And I don't know how to swim then I had a dream that I died in the water and they were laughting at me and didn't help me.

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