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Heartbeat

November 13, 2009
By hellokittyy46 BRONZE, Lapeer, Michigan
hellokittyy46 BRONZE, Lapeer, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You can't be old and wise if you were never young and crazy.


Ba-Bum, Ba-Bum
The autumn air is brisk
The scent of fallen leafs is crisp
Ba-Bum, Ba-Bum
I lay gazing up towards the windy
blue sky
With a boy that I love to call mine
Ba-Bum, Ba-Bum
The clouds dance a swirling dance
Watching them puts me in a trance
Ba-Bum, Ba-Bum
My head lays on his chest, my ear close to his heart
Now I know picking him to be the one was smart
Ba-Bum, Ba-Bum



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jerrykrinock said...
on Dec. 8 2009 at 9:09 am
That's a very grown-up poem, Leanna. Really interesting the way the meaning of "Ba Bum" finally becomes clear near the end.

Conrad K said...
on Dec. 6 2009 at 6:12 pm
beautious and hard-warming

on Dec. 4 2009 at 8:17 pm
Composed by a young girl in love

Good choice of words

Diane C said...
on Dec. 4 2009 at 4:27 pm
I love the use of repetition in this poem. Great work! Five Stars!!

Diane C said...
on Dec. 4 2009 at 4:26 pm
I love this poem!