Cable

November 11, 2009
By Karis Schneider BRONZE, Willis, Texas
Karis Schneider BRONZE, Willis, Texas
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The girl, Sarah, has no head. She has a television, always on, always glowing like a sun is always shining. She has pale white skin, the color of cooled oatmeal. When she walks she sways, an elephant lumbering down an African plain. She has deep brown hair that blows in the wind, and she wears a flowing dirty white tunic, a flag billowing in the breeze.



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on Dec. 6 2009 at 6:23 pm
This is excellent Karis. You are talented, especially when it comes to creative writing. I am so glad you let me know about your post. I agree that your descriptive writing paints an awesome picture. I agree with PastDave, I want to know more!

PastDave said...
on Dec. 5 2009 at 1:26 pm
Can't wait to meet more of Sarah's family or learn what she does each day. You've captured her with great word pictures! Thanks! Keep writing, O talented one!

davengwen said...
on Dec. 4 2009 at 10:11 pm
Evocative! Great mental image. Looking forward to reading more.


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