Love is A Hunter Cold to the Touch

November 11, 2009
By ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-


Black and blue creeps up into your heart so eerily, yet so elegantly.
Like a symphony of tears and heartbreak, whispering in your ear.
A spear to your heart, A sword to your soul.
No oxygen to your brain, It's fatal.
Love is fatal, It's cold to the touch,
Like your hand, like a corpse.
Its poison we drink.
It vices around,
Through veins
And blood,
Gets grip.
Still.

With it's vines it never lets go.
It stalks it's prey.
Its ready.
Are you?

You grab its hand and hold it, still, so still.
To warm it, but it never warms.
Yet you don't let go, ever.
You are determined.
Yet it feels,
All around
You, that
You're
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I am losing control, with her, with you, Love has crept inside me.
The blind boy has struck me down.
Now I want to fall, so far.
I want to fall so far,
Into the abyss
With you.



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on Jan. 3 2010 at 6:30 pm
xenon333 PLATINUM, Billerica, Massachusetts
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Wow i love that!! i've felt exactly like that :) keep writing this poetry it's stunning

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on Dec. 12 2009 at 2:14 pm
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

comments are always welcome!! :))


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