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Teenager
I'm sorry

that I screamed,
hurt your heart,
made you yell,
saw your tears,
made a cloud,
saw it darken,
made
it
rain,
while the
storm was
engulfing
you

I'm sorry

However
I scream even more inside,
I hurt
my own heart,
make myself
yell,
cry heavens full
of tears, make
my world cloudy
and dark,
I make a
storm, and
drown myself
in the
rain,
while the sadness
engulfs me

I'm sorry.

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RanaHewezi1998 said...
Jun. 26, 2011 at 6:16 pm:
wow that was amazing
 
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EleanorRigbysGospelofPeaceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 11, 2010 at 2:14 pm:
I like this. It has a lot of emotion in it, but it's kept simple. Sometimes simplicity is better. Congrats on a good poem.
 
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Siraidly said...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 9:43 am:
apology accepted
 
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writingtiger This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 4, 2009 at 12:27 pm:
Hey, sorry, I wrote this. Just forgot to unclick the anonymous button when I submitted. Enjoy!
 
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