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Adam and Eve MAG

November 10, 2009
By Julianna_H GOLD, Saginaw, Michigan
Julianna_H GOLD, Saginaw, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"You were born an original, don't die a copy."


You smile and talk to me
As I try to simplify my thoughts
I need to use simpler terms
Like I'm teaching someone
Much younger than me

I try to teach
But you just don't grasp it
I use everything I have

Flash cards
games
Tests and clues
In the end it's no use

So let me try
One last time
To let you into this heart of mine

I think you're amazingly perfect
The best man I've ever met

But that thing you said to me
The one that started with L
and ended with o-v-e
It wasn't true
No matter how much I want it to be

Yet I take the fall
I bet that's what Adam did to Eve



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on Apr. 8 2015 at 5:16 pm
apinkwildrose GOLD, Fredrick, Maryland
12 articles 23 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
were there is a will there is a way!

I think this poem is beautiful written, and if that guy makes you feel this way maybe you should try dating a guy that makes you feel like writing love poetry. I bet it would be real pretty:)

on Jun. 2 2010 at 1:14 pm
Thethingiseek BRONZE, N Las Vegas, Nevada
2 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"May we continue not to judge man by the color of their skin, but by the content of their character."- by
"The day we stopped fighting for eachother is the day we lost our humanity"-2012 movie
"No man is equivalent to the person next to him."me

I felt this...almost to a tear. It's sad to love when you dont get it back...beautiful piece of work

brittles GOLD said...
on Jun. 2 2010 at 12:22 pm
brittles GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
13 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
today is not a tragidy
when the power of love over comes the love of power the world will know peace -jimi hendrics

i felt the same way somanny time

on Jun. 2 2010 at 6:54 am
AndTheVinesSpin GOLD, Romulus, Michigan
11 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is the Movement" -TWLOHA
"Love is our weapon." -Christofer Drew
"I'ma get me a High School Diploma, even if I gotta steal one!" -ThisKidInMyMathClassLol

I get you,

Nicely written.

*****