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Could you say that nothing was there
So much love and joy in the air
The laughs fill our souls
This love taken from all we know

I looked in your eyes
Seeing beauty beyond the stars
Your joy finding me in silence
These memories never to be forgotten

There is no pain now
I hold your voice
So little to remember
So much to love





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Jandem said...
Jan. 26, 2010 at 2:24 pm
I love the meaning behind the poem; however, parts of it don't flow quite right. (It seems like the rythme is off a tad.) I would read the poem out loud multiple times to see if there is anything you can change.
 
Shannon_ replied...
Jan. 26, 2010 at 2:26 pm
I write alot of Free Verse so it doesn't always flow just right... but thanks for the critisism!
 
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 3:11 pm
Very pretty.
 
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