Memories

November 10, 2009
By Shannon_ GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
Shannon_ GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
12 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
For we are the children of The Lost Generation and Truth is blind.


Could you say that nothing was there
So much love and joy in the air
The laughs fill our souls
This love taken from all we know

I looked in your eyes
Seeing beauty beyond the stars
Your joy finding me in silence
These memories never to be forgotten

There is no pain now
I hold your voice
So little to remember
So much to love



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Shannon_ GOLD said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 2:26 pm
Shannon_ GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
12 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
For we are the children of The Lost Generation and Truth is blind.

I write alot of Free Verse so it doesn't always flow just right... but thanks for the critisism!

-Emie- SILVER said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 2:24 pm
-Emie- SILVER, Wayland, Massachusetts
8 articles 0 photos 171 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Well-behaved women seldom make history." - Laurel Thatcher Ulrich
"Fairy tales do not tell children that dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children that dragons can be killed." - G.K. Chesterton

I love the meaning behind the poem; however, parts of it don't flow quite right. (It seems like the rythme is off a tad.) I would read the poem out loud multiple times to see if there is anything you can change.

on Jan. 19 2010 at 3:11 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Very pretty.


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