"This"

November 10, 2009
By WriiteO2iinspiire SILVER, Little Falls, New Jersey
WriiteO2iinspiire SILVER, Little Falls, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
A real woman isn't perfect, and a perfect woman isn't real.


Constantly Awaiting
For The Lies That Are Creating
The Hesitating .
Why am I Not Appreciating
The Wonderful Things I Am Instigating.

The False Image That Is Portraying
Among My Remaining Mind That
Needs Much Explaining
Emotions inside That im Containing
Towards The People I Love,
-&' Love Blaming

For My Mistakes That Took Place
In such a fast pace
that Shamed Me into Hiding My Own Face
Behind a Mask That I could not Chase
Away From The Person I Should Embrace

Just take away my pain
That make these tears Fall
Like Rain
This is my one -&' Only Main
Focus To Disappear,Let me Explain
How this drives me insane
Knowing This Makes The Blood Pump Through My Veins.

I'm Done With This
All Of This
I don't Need This.
"This" Is No more.


The author's comments:
I wrote this piece in less then ten minutes, I was having mixed emotion and when I'm overwhelmed my words just start spilling out on Paper, Thank You For Reading this.

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have_a_heart said...
on Nov. 29 2009 at 1:25 pm
i found the rhyme a little forced which slightly threw off the flow.

ther than that it was nice and has potential :)

SLappY said...
on Nov. 29 2009 at 9:36 am
i really enjoyed this poem i think you have alot of talent but i also think that something was lacking but im sure that something will come as you get older =]

5/5 though great job =]


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