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Eternal Promise

ok....

just like snow,
these streets r so cold,
im poorer than poor,
but u seem to be my gold.


just like a fire,
bright flames intense with light,
ur the desire,
and the cure to my life.(remember that)


just like a gun,
whose trigger realeses death,
a kiss from ur lips,
would take away my breath.


just like an lamp,
who gives a wish plus two,
as a bonus wish,
my love is timeless towards u.


=and lastly=


just like a soldier,
who offers strengh and protection,
i would protect u with my life,
but the sheild is my affection..





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Hannahbear<3 said...
Nov. 25, 2009 at 10:52 am
hey soldierboy, so ya....this is adorable. you are really like amazing at writing poetry, which really suprises me cause your ....a dude, haha. i love it!
 
Lil_Soldier replied...
Nov. 25, 2009 at 8:09 pm
lolz
thanx hannahbear...=]
 
Hannahbear<3 replied...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 10:32 am
alrighty... ive decided that you should consider gettin on more often :P please??
 
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