Eternal Promise

November 8, 2009
By Lil_Soldier BRONZE, Madera, California
Lil_Soldier BRONZE, Madera, California
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Favorite Quote:
"You cant keep a good man down"


ok....

just like snow,
these streets r so cold,
im poorer than poor,
but u seem to be my gold.


just like a fire,
bright flames intense with light,
ur the desire,
and the cure to my life.(remember that)


just like a gun,
whose trigger realeses death,
a kiss from ur lips,
would take away my breath.


just like an lamp,
who gives a wish plus two,
as a bonus wish,
my love is timeless towards u.


=and lastly=


just like a soldier,
who offers strengh and protection,
i would protect u with my life,
but the sheild is my affection..



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on Nov. 26 2009 at 10:32 am
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

alrighty... ive decided that you should consider gettin on more often :P please??

on Nov. 25 2009 at 8:09 pm
Lil_Soldier BRONZE, Madera, California
4 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You cant keep a good man down"

lolz

thanx hannahbear...=]

on Nov. 25 2009 at 10:52 am
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

hey soldierboy, so ya....this is adorable. you are really like amazing at writing poetry, which really suprises me cause your ....a dude, haha. i love it!




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