That's The Way It Goes

November 8, 2009
The emotions I feel everyday
The tears I unleash every night
Why won't these feelings go away
Why do I feel like nothing is right

Building up Confidence from all these years
Feeling Like Failure from all the tears
Praying to god that things will work out
Not going to scream not Going to shout

Thoughts always come across my mind
Witnessing the whole worlds lies
Attempting to be more passionate and kind
Falling tears from those cries

No one understands how I feel .
What I feel is so unreal
Im the only one who knows
Life is an obstacle but ..
that's the way it goes.

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Loveisamazing1915 said...
Dec. 2, 2009 at 5:12 pm
this poem and all of your others are absolutely amazing. they are really terific. They obviously are coming from somewhere personal and deep. It takes alot to write down what your feeling insde. You did an amazing job.
Nov. 30, 2009 at 3:04 am
well, i feel like you do express what you feel. me me me me me, is somewhat correct. it's a little obvious; try to make a poem that really makes people think. those are always interesting. [=
keep it up, i think this good !
me me me me me said...
Nov. 29, 2009 at 1:33 am
two things; 1. don't make the words rhyme just for the sake of rhyming; 2. poetry is about seeing beyond what is obviously written. it's not a story, it's a riddle.
thisgirlcheyanne replied...
Nov. 29, 2009 at 3:47 pm
You're wrong. Poetry can be anything and it's a way of expressing yourself. Learn to understand what poetry really is.=]
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