My Angel

November 8, 2009
By rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"


I stomped in my room and slammed the door shut,
I lay on my bed and cried.
I'd lost my best friend, had a fight with my dad.
And got dumped by my boyfriend beside.
I fought to hold back the tears that fell down...
But they still fell down even so.
I felt like the workd was falling around me and i didn't know where i should go.
In the midst of my grief I heard a soft knock,
startled, i answered "come in".
The door opened slowely and I saw the face that ounce had enlightened a grin.
But now i saw only compassion and love...
it fought to comfort my soul.
And soft brown eyes that looked into mine,
they only had peace as their goal.
She sat on my bed and then took my hand,
she squeezed it then gave me a hug.
I felt that she was giving me a strength to climb out of this hole i had dug.
As we pulled bacck from the tender embrace,
I saw a tear in her eye.
Never before had I once seen (or noticed) her gentle and loving face cry.
I realized at once that she, like me ceeded somebody to love.
And still to this day my mother remains my angel God sent from above.



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on Jan. 23 2010 at 8:49 am
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

thank you so much! that made me smile, thanks =D

on Jan. 19 2010 at 3:35 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Awwww. This is truly one of the best poems I have ever read. Wow.

on Dec. 8 2009 at 9:08 pm
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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Wow.. just wow. Truly amazing. This poem is so deep, emotional, and meaningful. It's really really good. I love this so much~ Keep writing! (:

on Nov. 26 2009 at 1:34 pm
writerscramp PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Anyone who says winning isn't everything,
Has won nothing.
``Mia Hamm

agree with all of the above! keep writting from the heart, ok?

Fredwardness said...
on Nov. 25 2009 at 4:07 pm
i liked it, keep up the good work hannah

on Nov. 25 2009 at 3:15 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

thanks so much, my bestie hannah banana helped me write it.

on Nov. 25 2009 at 2:23 pm
Tomorrow.maybe SILVER, Houston, Texas
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My god, hannahbear, that was so good, and so insightful. I could feel the pain and emotion in it. Great job!!


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