The Eye

November 8, 2009
By bella123 BRONZE, Indianapoils, Indiana
bella123 BRONZE, Indianapoils, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Never doubt why you are special, only doubt why you are not."

The look from her eye
The gleam from her tear
The struggle she hides
Begins to come clear

The eye she tries to live without
Her pain she can’t scream aloud
She is tied and confused
She hides from the truth

Her hands are worn
From clawing her way out
Her heart is in ribbons and torn
From the inside out

She holds her head somewhat high
Her chin quivers toward the sky
She tries to shut her one eye
Her deception shines from here to there

The look in her eye
The gleam of her tears
The struggle she faces
They all begin to come clear

The author's comments:
I was inspired by the fact that even through lies your body language shows the truth.

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on Nov. 28 2009 at 5:18 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow :) amazing!! very well written, and i like the point you got across; subtle, yet very deep and meaningful :) awesome job! would you mind checking out some of my work?, id love your opinion :) thanks, and keep writing :)

Lanae BRONZE said...
on Nov. 27 2009 at 8:20 pm
Lanae BRONZE, Milford, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"'For I know the plans I have for you,' Declares the LORD, 'Plans to prosper you and not to harm you. Plans to give you a hope and a future.'" Jeremiah 29:11

wow. great job! thats really good

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