November 17, 2009
She’s an outsider that life’s never met
Inside her mind there’s no forgive and forget
She keeps her identity locked up inside
Inside her shadow is where she will hide
She’d really like to meet herself, get to know life,
Inside her troubled mind all that lives is darkened strife
Her sillhouetted image lies within the stone
The wall starts to crumble, the sillhouette gone
Captive in a low bitter air
She looks for her shadow, but it isn’t there
Her mind wonders freely, her shadow it seeks
Little by little her identity sinks
Into the darkness, back into the stone
Up above the darkness her shadow wanders alone
She begins to dissapear, her lonely mind cages her
Typical day in the life of a stranger

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LeilaniLives said...
Nov. 29, 2009 at 6:17 pm
What a beautiful piece. I very much enjoyed it.
rebelrose386 said...
Nov. 25, 2009 at 9:17 am
very well written it seems like the person doesnt really know who they are i do congratulate you on such a beautiful piece of work
eosberg replied...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 10:04 pm
wow this is very good!!! i like the way you write
HelloWorld said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 9:56 pm
i loved it. wow! you gave me goosebumps. this kind of reminds me of my own writing style. was there any specific person who inspired this? :-)
keep it up!
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