SIlver Waves

November 8, 2009
By L@L@girl PLATINUM, Traer, Iowa
L@L@girl PLATINUM, Traer, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
If there's a book you really want to read, but it hasn't been written yet, then you must write it. ~Toni Morrison


Your grey eyes wave like the sea,
staring inside the deepest side of me.
My stomach turns, twisting downward.
You held me up, so I've heard.

Push me to the shore,
because you cannot swim anymore.
Your silver eyes close,
as you arsoe,
leaving me staring at the sky.


The author's comments:
Basiclly when the water carries you to shore it is like a person was holding you up.

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on Nov. 29 2009 at 8:31 am
greygardens SILVER, Lombard, Illinois
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I love this poem! you really make the reader feel what you're feeling :) http ://teenink .com /poetry/free_verse/article/147175/opportunity/

on Nov. 27 2009 at 11:10 am
vamp_princess SILVER, Watertown, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Things are only complicated if you make them that way.

I love the poem

on Nov. 26 2009 at 8:03 pm
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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awesome poem! :)


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