SIlver Waves

November 8, 2009
Your grey eyes wave like the sea,
staring inside the deepest side of me.
My stomach turns, twisting downward.
You held me up, so I've heard.

Push me to the shore,
because you cannot swim anymore.
Your silver eyes close,
as you arsoe,
leaving me staring at the sky.

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neverland said...
Nov. 29, 2009 at 8:31 am
I love this poem! you really make the reader feel what you're feeling :) http ://teenink .com /poetry/free_verse/article/147175/opportunity/
vamp_princess said...
Nov. 27, 2009 at 11:10 am
I love the poem
MorningStar15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 8:03 pm
awesome poem! :)
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