A Broken Heart

November 7, 2009
By lph13 PLATINUM, Enid, Oklahoma
lph13 PLATINUM, Enid, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
“Life is one big road with lots of signs. So when you riding through the ruts, don't complicate your mind. Flee from hate, mischief and jealousy. Don't bury your thoughts, put your vision to reality . Wake Up and Live!” Bob Marley

i knew it was to good to be true.

my life isn't complete without you.

but you just had to crush my heart.

i changed for you and this is how you repay me.

i shouldnt have even done what i did.

it just caused another broken heart in the world why would you do that?
i wanted you so bad but now...
i just cry at night hoping you will change your mind.

but now i know that i was just stupid and your a heartbreaker.

but i still love you with the heart i still have .

The author's comments:
this i think was tha day after this guy said he wouldn't go out with me

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This article has 2 comments.

on Dec. 23 2009 at 4:41 pm
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
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Also, i love the line about just one more broken heart in the world, that's great! :)

on Dec. 23 2009 at 4:38 pm
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
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This is so good! Describe hiow you changed for him (i.e. did you dye your hair, change your personality, et cetera?). I really like how you say "I still love you with the heart I still have." Also, you might want to add in another line or two (not too much) just saying like how no matter what he does, it won't change how you feel. Kepp writing and I'll keep reading! Leave a comment on any one of my pieces if you get more published and I'll come check it out! :)


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