A Broken Heart

i knew it was to good to be true.

my life isn't complete without you.

but you just had to crush my heart.

i changed for you and this is how you repay me.

i shouldnt have even done what i did.

it just caused another broken heart in the world why would you do that?
i wanted you so bad but now...
i just cry at night hoping you will change your mind.

but now i know that i was just stupid and your a heartbreaker.

but i still love you with the heart i still have .





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.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. said...
Dec. 23, 2009 at 4:38 pm
This is so good! Describe hiow you changed for him (i.e. did you dye your hair, change your personality, et cetera?). I really like how you say "I still love you with the heart I still have." Also, you might want to add in another line or two (not too much) just saying like how no matter what he does, it won't change how you feel. Kepp writing and I'll keep reading! Leave a comment on any one of my pieces if you get more published and I'll come check it out! :)
 
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. replied...
Dec. 23, 2009 at 4:41 pm
Also, i love the line about just one more broken heart in the world, that's great! :)
 
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