I Wonder

November 7, 2009
i set there and i wonder what your thinking.

are you thinking about me?
because ive been thinking about you all day long.

your what i want and what i need.

i dream about you every night.

i dont think those dreams are gonna change anytime soon.

because you are all i think about everyday of my life.

if you leave ill die inside,ill be crushed.

but if you stay ill be the happiest person in the world.

so please stay dont go.

i love you dont ever forget that!





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.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. said...
Dec. 23, 2009 at 4:34 pm
This is anpther one of those pieces that is so easy to relate to. However, again, I think it could be better still if you go more in-depth about what you feel. Describe what you think of him and what makes him so special and why he would want you. What makes you special makes your writing special. Also, you could try to work that in here somewhere about how you're a great writer so he should want you above anyone else.
 
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