I tryed

November 7, 2009
By Rage97 GOLD, Hughesville, Maryland
Rage97 GOLD, Hughesville, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
" 3 out of 2 people have problems with fractions"
" History will be kind to me, for I intend to write it"


I tryed to speak, but you failed to hear me, I tryed to tell you, but didn't care, I said I love you, but you, you weren't there, you weren't there when i need you most, I loved you I still love you, but why do you still decide to hide from me, if you claim you love me then why don't you make your slef seen, because your scared, well I am too, and yet here I stand waiting for you to try,you can do it, do it for me for you, and we can both say we tryed, and try again is what we will do


The author's comments:
I wrote this piece because you should never give up on love or more inportantlly the people you love!!!!

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Rage97 GOLD said...
on Dec. 28 2009 at 10:14 am
Rage97 GOLD, Hughesville, Maryland
16 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
" 3 out of 2 people have problems with fractions"
" History will be kind to me, for I intend to write it"

thank you for looking at my poem it means a lot and yes I did spell "tried" wrong on purpose. I will look and rate your work for sure!!

on Dec. 20 2009 at 3:39 pm
abeatlesfan65 GOLD, Stillwater, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"My greatest trouble is getting the curtain up and down." - T.S. Eliot

Really good poem! You put a lot of emotion into it, and I think that will help when people try to relate. One question though... maybe I'm missing something, and it's part of the style, but why is "tried" spelled "tryed"? Simple mistake? No worries, just wondering. Again, good job! And could you also check out one of my poems, once it's posted? It's the first one that I've published on this site, and I want to kow what people think of it. Thanks!

Rage97 GOLD said...
on Nov. 28 2009 at 10:59 am
Rage97 GOLD, Hughesville, Maryland
16 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
" 3 out of 2 people have problems with fractions"
" History will be kind to me, for I intend to write it"

I really do hope you like my poem and if you don't mind could you possible rate it because no one has looked at it yet! Thanks with lots of love!!!! =]


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