Wishing Star

November 7, 2009
By Wildflower30 SILVER, Kolkata, Other
Wildflower30 SILVER, Kolkata, Other
8 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
Create your own sayings, for only then do they make sense most. ---- Me


I wished upon a star, one night;
Then I saw how far it can go,
Lighting the path it tread on,
Which shone with its afterglow...

It whooshed through the darkness,
Like a little flicker of hope,
Amongst all the desperation,
Assuring, we're not to mope.

And the wish I made on the star
Was something I longer for:
I wanted fame and recognition,
In this world of love and war.

I am just a nobody now,
A face in the crowd;
When will I really achieve my goal,
So I can be head-held-high proud?

Oh, mystic wishing star!
Enlighten me with your light,
I'm working hard to achieve my goal;
Make my future bright...


The author's comments:
Well, I do wish on wishing stars sometimes...

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on Oct. 17 2012 at 9:40 pm
Padoodallee GOLD, Haven, Kansas
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"I saw the angel in the marble and carved until I set him free." -Michelangelou

The way you make the star a symbol of hope is very common but you write it in a way that makes it more extraordinary. Well done.

on May. 24 2012 at 3:44 am
Wildflower30 SILVER, Kolkata, Other
8 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
Create your own sayings, for only then do they make sense most. ---- Me

Thank you! That means a lot to me, but this was written a long time ago, and it's more alkaline and immature than my other work!

on Apr. 17 2012 at 12:28 am
SweetSandyFlower GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Not everyone has to go to college because ..hello!.. PIZZAS DONT DELIVER THEMSELVES!!!!

SO GOOD. Very insrational. I love this one vey much. YOu are very talented.




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